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She wraps the swiftly falling twilight about her,
the last ray of light slanting across her smile.
Her rich, tangled red hair covered with leaves...
fiery orange, dying green, decaying brown.
She smells of woodsmoke,
and the crisp cold of an October night.
There are icy constellations in her eyes,
they rotate slowly, each star within dreaming
of warmer climes upon which to shine.
Her breath smells of cinnamon, and pumpkin spice...
she speaks in whispers, about masks and the runes
contained within the flight patterns of migrating birds.
She whispers the secrets of sudden storms at sea,
and the wishes of slumbering seeds.
Her feet are bare, her brocade dress torn.
Amber jewels hang about her neck, and grace her
pale, pale fingers.  
A leaf falls, she catches it in the palm of her hand.
It trembles, and then is still.  
She is the mother of transition, and of long sleep...
of endless dreaming nights.
The ancients worshipped her;
warmed by the light of bonfires,
they offered up stories with the pungent smoke.
The animals look to her,
sensing when her changes are near at hand.
They gather, or flee, or ready their burrows.
She speaks in whispers,  and we feel her in our bones;
her touch soft, yet insistent.
When the gentle caress of the summer winds
surrender to her chill exhalations...
we remember then, what we forget every spring.
The harvest moon is rising; it is her time again,
to walk the cornfields and the woodlands;
painting them with glittering hoarfrost...
everything is quiet, now-
save for the muted conversation of falling leaves...
and the brush of her cold, cold fingers against the trees.
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~suzkha Sep 25, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely amazing! It sent shivers down my spine!
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:iconmaenad77:
Aww, thank you! :)
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~suzkha Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
No need to thank: you deserve it!
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~suzkha Oct 3, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconhilstad:
The cadence on this is absolutely brilliant. I just read it to my wife and it was followed by that long, deep pensive silence before either of us could speak.

Well done.
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:iconwoodwose:
As Lughnasa approaches, and September is just around the corner this poem talks to me, making me long for that first frosty morning, the new sweet apples, the smell of woodsmoke and hot tea drank by firelight after the swift twilight of an Autumn dusk.
Goddess Bless
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:iconwoodwose:
mmm, and all the hedgerow fruits, nuts and berries!
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:iconmaenad77:
Though Summer is my favorite season, I find myself longing at times for those still, chill nights, the acrid scent of woodsmoke, the sensations of the earth, preparing for slumber. The stars shining coldly over barren fields; crows roosting on scarecrows. Watching the green man's beard turning from deep green to the myriad shades of flame. A beautiful time of year, one of deep reflection for me.

Thank you very kindly.
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~Lemius Jul 26, 2007  Hobbyist Interface Designer
That's f-ing gorgeous. I don't read something every day that makes me remember when I used to try and write and makes me want to go back at it.

When a poem is alive it seeps into every ounce of the readers creativity and gives them a momentary push from the same current that the author no doubt was riding in.

Thank you.
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